Creating a new poem: As wonderful as it sounds...

Hey there!

In this case our task was to make a poem by choosing one of the following ideas, as you can see I choose the first option:

A) A poem that tells what love is according to you. (As in "Song")
B) A poem which shows a discussion between two characters. (As in "The Clod and the Pebble")
C) A poem describing a revelation or a change of state (As in "Passion")

If you have never read the poem, here I let you a link were you can read it: http://www.bartleby.com/291/6.html

Here is my poem, is short and sweet:

As wonderful as it sounds...

Once I wake up, I can feel it,

Butterflies in my stomach, nervous on my head,

my body shaking every time I think about it.

It does hurt, but not too much.

Only when you go I'm alone,

 This feeling live in my imagination,the summer time 

and butterflies all belong to your creation.

Once a day, a week, a month, a year,

I feel depressed, not only because everything

I ever dreamed of dissapering when I wake up,

But there's nothing to be afraid of

As wonderful as it sounds I'm in love with IT,

Nothing can change that, inside my heart,

Its always alive, no matter what, 

No matter how.